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First Light by TheDogzLife First Light by TheDogzLife
'Tis a commish for :iconsparkystarhedgehog92:

She asked for her Warriors OC Hoperose with Runningwind from Warriors~

(According to WW this is what he looks like so, stuff you people xD)

Tried something new with the bg, blurring it so see if I could get like some perspective or something...

I like it better now xD

Oh and sorry for Runningwind's spazzy fringe... o3o /needtostopdrawingthem


Now then, they're most likely on Sunningrocks. But. Maybe they aren't. How should I know. o3o

Hope yous like it~

Hoperose belongs to ~SparkyStarHedgehog92
Runningwind belongs to Erin Hunter
Drawing belongs to me~
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u should of added Runingwind's mouth cause in here he looks like hes a rok or something. the shading is verrrrrrry well done. i kinda think that Runningwind himself needs to be a bit bigger even if he is behind Hoperose and his neck looks a bit weird. the rocks in the backround look ok but in the wild they wouldn't be that smooth but thats my only problem and the rock that they are on, the shading looks kinda weird and spotty in places and doesn't look smooth. the blur you did with the backround did add a lot of perspective but i dont think that you had to add the extra leaves or you should of added less of them but overall very good picture!
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Hello! This is my first critique using this feature so I apologize right away if I sound stupid or crude. I also tend to be a little blunt and try to be honest when it comes critiquing (as in I don't only give compliments) Ignore the vision rating as I honestly am not sure what it means, if anyone knows please tell me. ^^;

I honestly do not like Warriors very much and few of the artwork I've seen here stands out to me. This one is an exception however and caught my attention almost right away.

Originality- Sunset/sunrise scenes are used often, particularly with romance, but I've yet to see one like this. Normally, most artists would make the sun visible or put at the most small foliage such as bushes or grass. I like that you used a forest scene for this and added stones as well.

Technique- This is where your artwork stands out. I adore how you showed the fur strokes with the two cats and the trees look lovely. I particularly love how you showed the emotion on the male cat's face. There seem to be something off with the paws and legs, though I'm not that familiar with cat anatomy to be sure. One thing I really like is that you used colour for lighting and not only white. The lighting seems to be a bit off on the trees however, I can't help but feel the right ones may need a little more light, it might just be me however.

Impact- Overall lovely piece, granted there may be some flaws but nothing is perfect. You captured the emotion wonderfully however. I hope this helps somewhat, I apologize if it doesn't. You've much potential and I wish you the best of luck with your artwork. :heart:
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PerfectSkill Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love your pics
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TheDogzLife Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks :)
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PerfectSkill Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You´re welcome :)
You must know I love your work and i wish I can do this to :D
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Himitsu01 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2012
O.O b-chan THAT LOOKS SO AWESOME!!! O.O
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xThistlePath Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I swear this is my favourite picture from you. I love it so much I have no way of expressing it. :|

I'm being serious. It's like my fandom for GLaDOS and Danny, I can't go up to them and hug them because they aren't real, thus never turly expressing that I love them IN A FAN WAY :XD: . IT IS FRUSTRATING. I WOULD HUG THIS PICTURE TOO. I'm going off on one here. o.o

Aannd I just love the blurred BG<3 It makes it look like it has focus, like a photograph. c:
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TheDogzLife Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww thanks Owleyy <33

HERE YOU MAY HUG THE PICTURE NOW *gives hug-friendly picture*
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xThistlePath Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problem<33

THANK YOUUUU. *glomps* Do you stock GLaDOS and Danny in that format too? *shot*
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LongTimeHippogriff Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Love this.
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EpicTwizzy Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012
Soo cute& amazing :3
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EpicTwizzy Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012
Soo cute& amazing :3
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